Wow this was so amazing! you did such a wonderful job telling this story and its flowed so well! nice job! you have definetlyleft me impressed and you have earned yourself a place on my favorites list! keep it up!
This poem was truely amazing. It's one of the best I've seen on this site. It was so well written and had so much thought put into it. It was so beautifully done. And it has such an amaing story in it..
Wow. I'm impressed. I love the story it tells. Beautiful written. Loved every part of it! The end was perfect by the way. Made even more powerful. I'm impressed actually. Very well done! Lotsaa love -xxx-
What a great poem...this just shows ur true soul and the way u love life and the kind of pure heart that u have. u r an amazing person for sure and u r so much talented too.
right in my fav list u go with this poem
It is Tristan
OMG i miss hearing from you...I really love the new stuff...I want to say congradulations on your new writing you are so much better then I remember and I couldn't be more proud. I Love You So Much!
That was so good! Its actully took me on a journey! i saw the little boy with just a shirt, the woman with no shoes, and the little gurl who wanted to see the world! the way you put it all together is so amazing! you are a great poet! keep up the good work!
Powerful words Marjan this was wonderfully written. This poem makes us take a look at what we have and made me realize how grateful i am for everything in my life...even if at times i tend to over look the basic needs of food, love, and freedom. 5/5
Wow! its very awesome. nice poem Marjan not just poem but very..very..im impress!!!
keep on writng ha:)
this poem was reminds me that we are grateful that we are in this world and to be contented of what we have...
so my final rate is...............fabulous!