A world of darkness

by shelby   Jan 5, 2006


A world of darkness
know one around
know one to hear you
not even a sound
not a friend around
not even a care
for true friends are not found everywhere

my school is gone
so are my friends
so it is time for my life to end

i jab a knife through my heart
hoping death wont be so dark
but my life is over
and its at end
now my new life can begin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Evil One

    Nice poem, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. i loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AmazinglyEmpty

    Hey.. thanx for readin my poem.. hm.. lets see.. i gave this a 5 because i think its a great BEGINING... i think you need to add more onto it.. make it seem like a story that makes people wonder.. and then... bring on some really good stuff.. i liked it a lot.. keep it up!! ^_^

    athene

  • 18 years ago

    by Evil One

    I like it, read some of mine if you have a chance.

  • 18 years ago

    by shelby

    Plz wright comments i wanna know what everyone thinks?

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