Comments : My advice

  • 18 years ago

    by Amelia

    Wow, amazing poem! keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by melinda

    Wow, its so weird, because i feel the same way about my old best friend. even though were not relly friends anymore, i still wish her happiness with everything. this poem is so good and it really touched me. keep up the good work an dkepp on writting, because your very good at it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Make sure you see hope in a crying newborn
    And peace in a rushing stream
    Notice the awe in a violent thunderstorm
    And the satisfaction of fulfilling a dram

    This is definatley my favorite recnt friendship poems..OMG! I mean...Words will not express how much I love this poem..that Stanza above ^^^^^ THAT WAS AMAZING!!! My Mouth dropped..literally..amazing!!! This friend is making a mistake walking away from you.....you started off with a very strong stanza and ended even stronger!!! BRAVO! AMAZING

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Great poem! 5/5. Thanks for commenting and rating my poem 'It's time to show'

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    Great Poem. Suprising.

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww, wow this was wonderful! Very sweet amd so cute. Beautifully wriiten and very touching.

    Great JOb