Wow.. id hate to be on the receiving end of this.. lol.. your use of single lines totally punctuates the piece and gives it an indifferent bite.. Very interesting look into relationships, so brutally honest.. my fav part was:

An ounce of understanding and a roof to shelter you from external storms, and here you are,

Coping with the one I bestow.

The truth has been omitted, while lack of knowledge leaves you powerless.

I'll take the reigns for you, you hand them to me, willingingly.

awesome ending too - burning irony. pZ :)