Stop It!!

by The Poetic Child   Jan 7, 2006


Thinking that life
is a ride
but then they run and hide
they caught got in a bide
and cant stride
because they lied
and to smoke drugs
and be wanna be thugs
there getting shot
and caught
by the upper men
now please listen
Selling Drugs on the street
and nothing to be neat
and be happy about
look at this doubt
your gonna get hurt
once that gun throws that spirt
the bullet will penetrate
feel the hate
as i dedicate
this freestyle
Trial
to you
look at what you can do
we all have the skill
to cause a thrill
in your own will
to be a doctor a medic
This gangstaness is pathetic
lookin at your aesthetic
wearin humongous pants
just so we can glance
at your underwear
lets not look down there
Wearin Shirts With A gun
but yet u think its fun
when your in the winning stick
but take a look at it
be in his position
in his mission
you'd be scared
its his heart thats tared
let me make the noise
and have my voice
be heard
look at my herds
of words
and listen
look at the condition
we have families in
because of your gangsta sin
shooting and taking lifes
Husbands lost there wifes
children with no mothers
Kids who lost there brothers
weeping over the grave
but you could of saved
that life
if u would of dropped that knife
took away the gun and drop it
so please, listen when i say
stop it......

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    A very excellent meaningful poem....i think everyone should read this poem to make them think...i love it!!!...keep it up...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu

    I love this poem. It shows an emotion that I totally relate to. I live in a "ghetto" kinda town, & it's ridiculous what people do to try to be thugs & all. It sounded like a rap though. ( in a good way) like, my cousin is in this band Soul Somatic, which is a Christian group, they describe themselves as "hip-hop with hard guitars", && it sounds like a song they would do. I don't know, I'm wierd! lol. Well I will ttul. buh-byeez! ; ]

  • 18 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    Ur rhyming skillz are tight, I love the way you flow it just makes me wanna read more, so here i go reading more of your poems.........

  • 18 years ago

    by Jasonsboo

    Another great poem. I love it! I'm afraid that one day my brothers gonna end up dead and not come home. It a fear, just thinking about it. Another poem im gonna have to show him. Keep up the great work. I lvoe your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    I am speechless! you should really get this published as a song. you should rap it, or something! if i could give you a ten i would! wow, i gues that i wasn't so speechless!