Comments : Cant Promise Nothing Will Change

  • My new poem wrote it bout my girlfreind cos we live far apart but we are still very much in love.....need more comments on my poems plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  • 18 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Awww.. this was beautiful and awesome write indeed.. *5*.. You deserve it, hehe.. Keep em'coming! Cuz I know this one is on the list.. hehe.. some list.. hehe.. I don't know.. haven't made me, yet:PLoL...

    -x-Sedusha-x-

  • Loooooooooooooooooooooool

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... great writing. The rhyming pattern of it was excellent and the whole poem was so romantic... I hope that things work out in the end, and I'm glad that you aren't giving up on this person. great writing~

  • 18 years ago

    by Leeraina

    Good job! i like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Hey, thanks for the comment :) 5/5 for sure! it's cute. keep it up

    heidi

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Ok i am bein nice lol..no rly DUDE this was so INCREDIABLY amazing i dont kno why peeps dotn read ur stuff...its wow UR SO FLIPPN GOOD. One of the best on this site, i think...WOW

    Lissa