That was amazing! it was so beautifully written-i loved the words you chose. i wud love to know what it is about-ples tell me xxx

Oo can i be told what it is about aswell,please? great poem by the way.

ME ME ME!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's beautiful! possibly a new favourite...possibly! i love the peace and quiet of it with that overtone of sadness and morbidity as you so creatively put once upon a time :)

Great write. The sound and flow was smooth and well done. I enjoyed it. The rhyme scheme is the best and the words were great.
~The Unforgiven

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! TELL TELL TELL!!! that was so...so...fantasticallyamazoinglybrilliantlysupoib. it really really really was. the pace was so calm and peaceful, reflecting on the sadness....oh! i dont know how to describe it's maginficence!!! i think i need a badge.