I just want to tell you, that you're not the only one. I'm just a girl like you, I just thought of the good things about love, I didn't know that it could hurt that much. Promise me that you'll be better with this (hard) experience =)
Moon~U

Hey thanks for commenting on mine I really appreciate it...your are really good too I can relate to this sooo much it almost fits me exactly! but I've learned too that even tho it hurts sometimes loves what makes life worth living! well I hope to hear from you soon

Heyy this one is good do me a favor and check out my new peom "cry" i just wrote it the other day.

Beautiful poem! I like the way you tell a story through your poem. It's great and you're good with words.. Do check out my poems if u like. ;)

I really like the ending and girl you speak the truth all guyz ( well most ) are dogz!!!