Dont fall in love

Sorry i don't remeber u, but this poem was insightful and nice to read.
*melanie

It is true as much pain in love not in any other think.

pyaar ko pana, ya pyaar mein vapha ka ho na jarui nahi hota.
humne kisi koi sache dil se pyaar kiya ye jarooi hatahai.
love is a journey not a destination.
if love get destination, it would be end.
pyaar kao lekin kisi taha ki umeed mat rakho.
pyaar ka dusra nam dard hai.

You write great poems. i could tell that you can't really feel love i nyour life, but i think you sholud lighten up a bit. I'm not trying to give you a lesson, but i know how you feel. I felt the same way before. You just have to keep believing. If it's really for you, then HE will give it to you. You just have to wait, patiently. Very nice poem though.

Thats like...SO tru
take care
xoxo

An interesting poem, it works well in general as it has a hint of irony and comic value as well, a couple of the rhymes are a little forced but the feeling is very obvious, the overall poem works well and I think you didi a good job conveying your feelings!
Well done and remember just because you have one bad experience doesnt mean there is no one out there for you.. I wish you the best of luck!
xxx