This is a great peom i like your other peoms tooo.

If u say i love u and you mean it, there will come a time when someone will say the same and mean it too ! love does exist, just keep faith...if u dont believe in it, u wont go on very far..because it teaches u to forgive, to forget some stuff, to share feelings and exchange them..i dunno, i really liked the poem, it's nicely written, but u should be more optimistic!

Really good shyguy

Come on Farooq i know you're a softy so don't be saying love sucks. You would just rather flirt than falling in love cuz that is you, but that's a ppl would rather fall in love than flirt there life away.
~*~Heather~*~

Woah...im silenced..
that sounds like a breaking heart...take care farooq.

Woah...im silenced..
that sounds like a breaking heart...take care farooq.

I like it...i now get the dove thing earlier

Wow nice poem its really good, i want ur talent but i cant have it so ill settle for mine.

luvies
jenny

Lol funny loved it

This is an excellent poem & sadly it is all so true. Keep up the good work.

Hey dude come on love does exist...and love will come to your life too....its a great piece of poetry..just keep writing...great job...5/5

Love does exist...i used to think it didnt but i believe now.....good poem though b/c everyone has their own opinions!

Hey ya...dis is sad....but great work...
keep it up..miss ya...luv dia

Great poem!
fabulous
so true
probably not what i needed to read but anyway
thanks
Wings

Hey!
I can see how u felt like love doesn't exist. Somtetimes it can really screw you up.

=) Keep Safe

This is such a true poem great job ;) but jst bcoz it happened to be not true love it doesnt mean there aint another time ;) so dnt give up

I agree w/ fay on this on....love is true and u will find it one day...good luck

An interesting poem, it works well in general as it has a hint of irony and comic value as well, a couple of the rhymes are a little forced but the feeling is very obvious, the overall poem works well and I think you didi a good job conveying your feelings!
Well done and remember just because you have one bad experience doesnt mean there is no one out there for you.. I wish you the best of luck!
xxx

Thats like...SO tru
take care
xoxo

You write great poems. i could tell that you can't really feel love i nyour life, but i think you sholud lighten up a bit. I'm not trying to give you a lesson, but i know how you feel. I felt the same way before. You just have to keep believing. If it's really for you, then HE will give it to you. You just have to wait, patiently. Very nice poem though.