Comments : A Battle You Can't Win

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darien. h0w ya g0in darl. a very
    t0uching write. i really like the way uve
    written this. heartfelt hun. g0od j0b.

    l0tz 0f l0ve/d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    WOW!! Great stuff Darien, this truly is magnificent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Izzie

    This is really good. if im right on what your talking about. i know i have sure never wanted to give in, but with no good outcome back there was no use in trying anymore.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Damn it Darien, this is a masterpiece. Very unique and beautifully written. Captures many heartfelt emotions as well. I love it....

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    Very unique Darien.
    Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by you know who

    Wow ! this is sooooooo friggin good !

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow Darien, I love this! Very unique and written so perfectly, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Muah! Loved it :) Nice writing, as always *tips hat* I love reading it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Darien,
    Just want to tell you that I love your poem, very sad and touching, but great my friend. Take care and good luck with your music. Friendly Hugs!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMyThanatosXx

    "All hail the Vietnam war
    The second chapter is about to unfurl
    All hail to the Iraqi war
    A battle not worth fighting for"

  • 18 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW....this poem hit home with me....amazing write and thanks for your comments and concern i really appreciate it...I am okay! anyways i loved the poem its just sad because soldiers are not born they are made.....amazing job

    take care
    Miss.Scooby

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris

    Great Poem

  • Great write. unique style, great flow and concept. clever word play. a touching piece. very well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved it. You have a lot of talent, keep it up. :) *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    I definitely agree that love is comparable to war, but if this is a life experience, then she's obviously not worth it, either because she has a good reason not to go out with you and she's being virtuous, or she's playing hard to get, in which case she's doubly not worth it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Maria

    Wow that was brilliant.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem. It completely explains the dilema you can be in in those situations. Wonderfully executed great job. Looking forward to seeing some more of your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Clouds n ur Is

    Great poem.

    *Clouds n ur Is*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    I haven't commented in a while, but this poem was great! You do a wonderful job in your writings!
    BloodRedRose

  • 18 years ago

    by -Beauty-

    Tragic..Yet Hit My Heart..h0p3 That Din't Happ3n 2 y0u...If so...Th!ngS w!ll g3t b3tT3r