I liked it alot better than any thing i've ever wrote u can see for your self!
Candy

Wow! Brilliant, I loved it, keep writing I'm gonna' go look at some of your other stuff lol.

Hey sarah I thought it was really good, and written well, hey I got a site as you well know so you can go look at them if you want

Thats a really nice poem i liked it alot thanks a bunch for commenting on my poem love ya!!!!! keep it up