This Is A Great Poem...Full Of Emotions...Im Speachless...Waiting for part 2!!
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Ohhh very creative poem Atomic!! Great stuff I loved this story. It kind of reminds me of the Corpse Bride, hehe :D

Wow. that was really g0od. l0t 0f em0ti0ns in this p0em. i v0ted 0n this earlier but because i wasn't signed in i c0uldnt c0mment. s0 n0w i am. i cant wait wait t0 red the next few parts. =) keep it up!

l0tz 0z l0ve / d0ra
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Powerful, and deep poem. It also holds a unique meaning to it too.

Always Awesome Atomic!!! "Is it him that she soulfully desire,
Or is it him that she so much despise?" Thats my favorite part, but don't you mean "Desires"? Oh well!! THe poem is great! I can't wait for part two!!!!

~Anthony

Wow.. this was just so amazing... so creative and so well written... very nice job! you have me extremly impressed! keep it up!

sammie

Very creative poem, so much emotion. it was done so amazingly.

This is great your a great writer
i love this poem it is really good

love always
tabby

Very deep, has really peeked my interest....... waiting for the next part.

Great vocabulary in this poem. The ending seemed rather sudden and I'm not quite decisive as to how I feel about this piece but it certainly does have great, original content. Keep on writing, you are a great author and you don't need me to tell you so. Remember to keep check on your rhythm and meter, you managed to keep a good steady flow on this one and I really admire poets who can do that. Best of luck in the future.

Wow. that was some great. work. i loved the last line You can't see what's meant to be unseen.
it was great. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

That was a good poem i liked it alot u are a really good writer u should keep up the good work

Wow, I've seen you on here a while ago when I used to come by often...but this was excellent. Great job...

Hina

Wow.... thats all I can say.... wow. Beautiful job.

"Draped in the purest of white lace.
With tears streaming downwards,
Streaking her sad and pallid face."

Your Choice of Words are genuine.
Remarkable Poem, Loved It. 5/5 ~Christina

Wow.. this was just so Great.real creative.... Excellent Job.....Keep up the great work..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great job!!!

Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

LOVE
Micky

Wow that is really good! I can't wait to read part 2... the imagery in this was amazing..I could picture it all in my mind & it flowed very well.. Great job on this!