I See You Right Before Me

by obsessedgurl   Jan 13, 2006


I see you right before me
My rare and dauntless prize
Your eyes are bright and loving
And possessing no lies

Your lips smile at me
Then converge onto mine
I feel your lips caressing my own
I get chills up my spine

You are so sweet my love
You are the man of my dreams
Everything you whisper is full of truth
And you make me feel serene

Thank goodness you're mine boy
You're better than the other guys
I see you right before me
But only when I close my eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    WOW! I really want this comment to express what I'm feeling but you honestly left me speechless! It's poets like you that inspire me (and there aren't too many of those). This is definatly one of my favorites! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Very nice job.. i really liked this poem... it flowed well and was amazing.. keep it up... you defenitly have talent...

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was a great piece of writing, and i especially liked the ending. i felt that this was a passionate poem that was full of depth and flowed extremly well. well done and i look forward to reading more from you.

    Brad

    P.S. thank you for commenting on my poem 'You Make Me Fly'. i appreciate all comments good and bad, as i fell they help me to improve my writing. so thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by ѕуиєявσу

    Thanks 4 commenting on my stuff to most ppl just ignore me lolll ........syner xxx ...nice work..im not very good at commenting sorry lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Brilliant!!! deepfully meaningful and poetic 5/5 =)

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