Without You

by obsessedgurl   Jan 13, 2006


It may sound like I'm whining
But I'm actually pining

It's really you I miss
And It's you I'd like to kiss

I couldn't describe this passion for you if I tried a million ways
And the last time that I saw you was in over five days

It truly is really wrong
That we have to be apart for so long

If I could just see you're face again
The face that's different from all other men

I'd spend every single dime
Just to see you one more time

If the world should stop I'd be here without you
Boy, why can't I stop thinking about you?

Is it because you're so darn cute,
And when I see you I suddenly get mute?

Or the way your smile's on your face,
Because you're perfect in every place?

Either way, all I know
Is that your smile would melt the coldest snow!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Pretty well-written!
    I like the devotion this expression has in the atmosphere.

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    This is the best..very nice ..u really made ma eyes teary!... 5/5 for sure keep on writing=)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Gorgeous! *grins* loved every second of it! and i'm REALLY glad u liked my poem! its my favorite one! lol... anyways... keep on writing cause I really like your work! *hugs*

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awwwwwwwwww thats so cute, i loved it it was a nice poem.
    Thanks for commenting on my poems
    it really meant alot to me
    in this poem i can really relate to it with my gf.
    i havent seen a in a month :P
    very long time
    any way you got the talent in writing
    keep up the good work
    :)

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