Comments : Lucky to be with you

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Omg this is sooo sweet. short and right down to it. i love it. i really hope u and ur man work out!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    : ) this poem was fantastic!!! I'm so glad to read that you and your boyfriend are sooo in love!!! Best of luck to the both of you!!! This poem was really sweet!!! Keep it up!!
    Luv jess xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was really sweet and it had a lot of emotion but not a lot of rhythm or flow. it was still a 5 though cause that feeling of love is unmistakable.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    You make like the shortest poems but yet u make them so powerful and great..excellent job...Really Really Great 5/5
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, sweet poem. Try to experiment by not always using the same words.

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Aaawwwwwww... this is so cute.. im starting to wonder if i ever fall in love am i gonna feel this crazy and be able to write such short poems with SOO much emotion.. :P gud luck to the both of u.. u didnt reli rhyme, but it was reli gr8
    take care
    keep it up, hunni
    Nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    It is short but good the reader can really feel the emotion. I noticed some lines rhymed while others didnt maybe you might wanna try making all of them or none. I also agree that you could be more creative with the words. Overall I liked it and I could so see that going in a card :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awwww.....isnt that sweet. it was really good. keep it up.
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This is sweet and very cute. i would have to say. i really like this one also. You are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    So tender and sweet!
    It's a blessing to have someone's true love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    That was sweet I'm sure he'd love it

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    OK. I really think this is a wonderful poem. I am sure he will love it.

    But, I think it needs to be longer, but if you can't think of anything, don't ruin your poem. And also, I think the ending is a little weak, but that's just me. Your poems rock.

    I know we'll make it through anything
    I do love you more than life itself
    I am so lucky to be with you!!

    I dunno what you could put as the ending. hmm.

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    It's cute. If you to read this to a guy/girl, it'd be adorable. I can't say that it's a brilliant work of art, because it isn't, but it sounds like a little cutsy thing between lovers.

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Aw thats such a cute poem
    it flows well and shows true feeling 5/5
    keep it up
    ~pip xoxXxox

  • I am truly glad that you are happy in love!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats very nice!
    has all the love emotions in it
    it was short nice, straight to the point
    keep it up