Comments : Blood on the Wall

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Holy moly, Bill! This is so dark and haunting. WOW!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Wow, that's different.... Although I like your love and friendship poems the best, I think this one's great as well. Nice job...keep it up and always take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhonda

    Wow..................................................that gave me goosebumps, i could actually visiualize the whole thing. that was a good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    Dude, thats friken awsum, u got sum real talent man!!! its like SlipKnoT's alter version of ViRuS Of LiFe!!! i loved it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by latoya

    WOW . That s a wonderful poem. Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That was so well expressed, I've never been in that position, but you articulated it so well!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brian John

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammy

    Great write Bill.
    Very different from what we are used to from you, but very well done.
    I could see the whole thing happening as I read it.
    Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by tayler

    This ws pretty good.....i liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    @...wow...that was awesome...i was so into it, it was hard to get out...@

  • 18 years ago

    by Innocent Danger

    I love this poem .. dark and scary what i need right now ... have u ever cut? cause u seem to be a very good to refrence how it rlly feels!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nina Star

    Wow