Comments : Just wanna be happy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jonathan

    I don't want to say "i know how you feel" cause I don't, but i recognize some of the feelings you are writing about. sometimes i too feel empty and numb. But that's not much compared to these you are refering to. but if you want to talk you can email me at jonde_j@hotmail.com. good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Pallav

    Dear nelle....i loved ur poem...its so deep and touching...10/5...i just wanna say tat ur emotions jst came alive with this poetry...luv ya pal

  • 18 years ago

    by Person

    Very deep,it may be your first but it's well done keep working at it you'll perfect your poetry skills as you continue to write.

  • 18 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    Its a great poem for being ur first. it expresses great feeling 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Maria

    That was really good and no its not too much to ask i hope every thing works out 4 u ! xox

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Ohh i like that was very sad and i know i understand hang in there. xoxo Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Dino Dhamphyr

    This is a very good poem,I love it,It was deep and very well written keep it up....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MBG

    Hey this is a good poem....and i hope u do find happiness soon...plz dont feel this way b/c there are so many greatthings out there in the world waiting for you....good luck!
    -peace-

  • 18 years ago

    by Sonny

    Hey, I think this one is really sad but its also REALLY GOOD n I think you should write more cause I like this one alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Same here.... good poem ... well expressed...

    if you ever need anyone to listen, let me know... ok?

    big hugs,

    michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Your poems are all like a deep blue ocean that no one can get through it. you are very very great person nelle

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Elow to your self

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Be glad cause god give you a good heart for sure you are

  • 7 years ago

    by Felica K Breton

    I love this it not only tells how i feel but i can feel your pain