Pain Within

by ~~Lindsay Woods~~   Jan 19, 2006


I love you, but you won't take me back,
I did something i shouldn't have,
I broke up with you because it was the best thing to do,
But now i can't stop thinking about you.

I think about the good times we had,
And now i feel very mad,
I should of told you this before,
And now i love you even more.

I remember that day i said good-bye,
I remember how you made me cry,
You hate me, it ain't a sin,
And now all i can say is,
I have pain from deep within.

TO: The One I Still Love~~~ ~~~Always And Forever~~~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Yet another great poem. I really truely like it. :)))))

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Love poems are your thing and they really do move me as a reader. At time the syllable count was a bit over which mucked up the flow a bit. But love conquered all in this...AWESOME!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent work! I can relate to this so much, even at this point, though I am with someone else I am still in love with the one I left, and I totally regret it. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, clearly written
    You can try putting in more descriptions and imagery, such as similies. Also, try to use "I" less. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Aww..I hope you feel better. I know how you feel though, its a touhg feeling to have and life with.

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