Really felt with this one. "the dream of hope" or the "hope of the dream", it really gives a punch.

It sucks the most when both are gone for you awake to tears and a pain that won't disapear no matter the lies you tell your heart or the happiness you try to fake...i wish that you never have to awake to that day or that hour...you're a beautiful and gifted writer never stop writing for it will never fail you...5/5 love jess~

Gary nice poem.. yours always stop and make me think. i love that you tend to draw the reader into your poems that is so cool i love the first two verses of the poem it is a really good way to start that poem awsome write!
take care, sarah

I love the first two lines of this poem and those two lines force you to read the rest. I read every word of your profile and feel honored that you even read one of my poems. Thank You and I look foreard to reading more of yours.

Very heartfelt, my friend....truly beautifully written.

lvoe ya, Ann

Wow... your poems are all so cool... these lines seem like they could be lyrics to a song... so good!!

I thought it started off in a positive way but by the end I could read deeper and the sad atmosphere you have created is excellent. I like how this is short and to the point but still have heaps of 'layers' to it. I also enjoyed the structure, how it runs freely but is still controlled throughout. Awesome stuff :)