Comments : Voices in the snow

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Intriguing title. you captured winter so beautifully. I heart these types of poems :) reading this brought back memories of my older brothers and I playing in the snow... alas, those were the days...

    "The joys of my youth
    and the peace I have found
    Most of all I remember
    all the laughter that use to grow
    Because as long as there's a winter
    There will be voices in the snow"

    ...now they're grown up and moved away and I play with my younger brothers... its not the same but I remember the days...

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    "I hear voices in the distant"

    I hear voices in the distance
    ^sounds better :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I really liked the last stanza.
    and I really liked the title.
    it makes you want to read the poem.
    may you be as happy as me :) ,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Once again ... you took me on a trip! Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Such a beautiful write.....

    love Ann

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.