This is a cute poem. I really like it. Keep up the good work.

Thank you

Nice job with this... I think that it would flow a lot better if you added some punctuation... It would help the reader be able to feel the flow a lot easier... Other than that a very cute poem and well thought out... Very, very nice job... Keep it up

sammie

Nice poem. it had good meaning to it but the flow was a little rough. but keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

I hope you got a hobby 4/5