0oh a t0uching piece. very well written. great use 0f w0rds/ thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. it meant al0t! =)

l0ve always d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Bravo! må si du skriver bra. og om du bare er 14 år så har du utrolige evner. er ikke mange skrivefeilene heller..

Awesome flow, great job. :)

Nicely written and strong in voice, well done work!!!

Really great job on this one, great flow, just all over good work!

Thanks for your comment!!
As always, my b-f drives me crazy... lol... but that's how boys are!! he makes me really happy, that's most important!! :p
I love this poem of yours! it's incredibly written, and I actually like them all, I took the time to read a few!
take care,
check out some of my other poems if you have the time!!
Byrsene

I thought it was really good but i thought it seemed kinda robotic.. like you HAD to put the words there not because you were already gonna write that.. before it rhymed other than that it was great 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow, I loved it. The flow and the ryhme was amazing. This was a very emotionally written peice of poetry. Good Job. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Wow this really is something special,
i loved every last line
it really touched me!
good work

XxXxsmilexXxX

Thanks for the comment on my poem it was for my boyfriend if you haven't noticed and it really means allot to hear that it was good.
Anyway i really liked this poem it sound as if you speak through you words. when i read this poem i felt sadness but i also felt that you gained courage through that experience

That's right, stay strong. great poem

This is realli good i enjoyed readin it u have a perfection i loved it and all the otehrs i have red mwa

I really liked it, good job