Once again lol... I like it its an awesome poem, as well as completely true. Great Job!!

BEAUTIFUL!!! I just recently became a Christian, to be exact on January 14th. And this is absolutely beautiful!!! GREAT JOB!!!

Hey please correct my mistakes! That would be great!!!

Oh, my god you're right! I don't know what was wrong with me, I normally don't make such mistakes! Thanks for correcting me and if you find more mistakes please let me know! That would be great!!!

Poem is amazing.. im glad to see you're out there sharing your faith! its the most wonderful rewarding thing ever.. keep on sharing and keep on praising god!

You're poems have awesome rhyming scheme and such meaning, where as mine are scrambled all over the place. oh well, I'm having scrambled thoughts.

Your poem is really inspiring. I'm a Christian and I also hope that one day I could make a poem for God. This poem you wrote is really good. Keep it up! ( ^_^ )

This is a good poem, I'm personally not much of a believer but that was cool how you rhymed it all pat yourself on the back

Thanks for reading my poems! i didn't even remember putting curse in there, and thanks so much for pointing it out! i'll have to find out about the drug reference, see if i have to take it out. keep writing, and thanks for reading mine and commenting on it!

Very good. Beautiful and majestic

That was a beautiful poem. I love the way you are writing and sharing you belief in God...Keep at it!

Wow

Awwwww.....cool poem... i believe in God too... keep the great work up!

hugs,

michelle

This is a nice job done by you! Wonderful poem... Great thinking!

That is a great poem..You are a good writer. Thanks for your honesty and I will correct the mistakes. thanx bye

I have a new favorite of ALL your poems! I SO admire you! Keep up the ggod work. You truly inspire me.

Your work is wonderful i truly enjoyed this poem.the work was smooth and very well thought out and yet it has so much feelings a difficult combination to master

Hey wow, that is amazing!! Its great that you would share God through your poetry! Keep it up...i just signed up for this site so I dont have any poems yet..