A boy said to a girl...

by Bethan   Jan 22, 2006


A boy said to a girl 'I love you,'
The girl asked 'how do I know it's true?'
The boy replied 'do you trust me?'
The girl said 'Help me to.'

The boy then said to her.
'I'll love you till the day I die.'
The girl said 'that means nothing,
If 'I love you' was a lie.'

The boy asked 'How can I prove my love?'
she said 'don't break my heart when things get tough.'
he said 'but I love you,
isn't that enough?'

The girl told him 'Love means nothing
-it's a 4 letter word,
It's what you do not what you say
That really shows its worth!'

The boy acted astonished and genuinely shocked,
'But I love you more than anything; you're all I've got.'
The girl answered matter-of-factly, 'exactly, all you've got,
It's not love for me you have its dependency, is it not?'

The girl then understood when she declared,' Your Love is just a lie;
You say those words to use me and then think I'll just comply,
That may have worked on other girls, ones who believed in you,
But to me your words are meaningless, so you and I are through.'

to be continued.......
(Der r 2 other consequential parts 2 dis 1 bdw!!!!)

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good job! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by beyond help

    Wow
    5/5 definately
    great poem .... and thanks for the comment on untittled , it means a lot

    bEyOnDhElP

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h hun a t0uching piece. very well written. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. i have t0 read the 0ther parts. =)

    l0ve always d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Charles

    Wow wow wow, thats all i can say at this stage. this poem really blew me away gal serious. it is really exposing to other gals, the lies us men do to get a bit of nookie!!!!!!!!! keep it up playa

  • 18 years ago

    by NeXuS

    For real, make sure that this never happens. but still girl ur poem is big!!!