Wow. There's nothing more I can really say. This is such a beautiful write. Deserves nothing but a 5/5 for sure. Keep writing and take care.

With love,

*> : PainOfOne. blaine

This is great, i'd love to hear this as a song, what way would it be played, genre i mean!!! well bye bye
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Brilliant peice, the use of colours to represent aspects works very well.

5/5

Exellent! loved it. the constant referal to the colours were exellent!
thanks for the comment!

Ruby

I could see that actually being sung ;) good rhym to it and all around brilliant write 5/5

-christina