Comments : Future against the past

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Nice write, especially the first stanza perfectly describes the way I felt for a long time, so I know and can feel what you expressed so great. The 3. line is very well done, but the last two lines of the second stanza are my faves though the whole poem gives me comfort and made me think about your great work and this is what a very good poem should do , it should make you think about it after the sensations captured you.

    Keep it up
    Please, vote and comment back , that would mean a lot to me
    Sabine