My Greatest Fear

by Lu   Jan 23, 2006


This fear I feel deep inside
follows me around, never far from my side

Can you promise it will always be
us forever ... for eternity ?

No amount of love can erase
the fear that another, could take my place

Painfully arguments are hard to swallow
will colored rainbows always follow ?

As we age and grow old
could our love die, turning cold ?

I know you would give me the stars above
yet can you promise me eternal love ?

My greatest fear will always be
that someday... you will stop loving me

NEXT LETTER MM'S IS ----> O ... PM ME FOR YOUR NEXT FREE LETTER AND YOUR DIRECTIONS.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    Nice poem, i read one of yours and had to keep reading, you are very talented :)
    love steph

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Luanne You have such an awesome talent. I love reading your poems. It has been a while. but I will rate and comment on as many as possible.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    I loved this poem. Everyone in love always has this feeling and you put it into words really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    I think that your poem was good

  • 18 years ago

    by Diana Hughes

    Hey, i loved this poem!!!!!

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