Comments : Give Us A Chance

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darkl. a t0uching piece. very well written. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. t0uching write.

    l0ve always d0ra
    *-*x00o00x*-*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    What an incredibly touching poem...

    Such a beautiful piece written from the heart ....I think forgiveness is on the way...

  • Awwww mami..this is sooo cute...and i cant wait to see tha one in spanish...but in the english version you didn't add everything that i kinda told you to...well its amazing anywayz...and i'm just waitin 4 the one in spanish...lol...well te quiero muchooo...byez

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    I really like this poem great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Hey sweety! that poems was great!! and especially for 15 mins! i know how your feeling! i went through the same situation a bit ago with my ex! i cheated on him! and now i feel sooo bad! i want him back sooo sooo much!! im willing to do anything!!
    please look and comment on my poems!
    love Paige!
    xoxoxoxo
    keep ^ the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Wats good yo my name is Naynay And i want to let you know that the poem was very nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Talisa

    Great job.. I really like this poem.. please read some of mine and comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    I really like this poem. I can feel your emotion in it. Some of the best poems are written in a little amount of time because those are the ones that really come from the heart. Great Job, I give it a 5/5, I think it deserves more than that though!!! Read and comment on some of mine please. Thankx

  • 18 years ago

    by I am Michelle

    Hey...you've been on here for quite a while and i think you're a great writer too. I haven't been on here long myself but i think you're a wonderful writer and i'm going to take the time to read a couple more...great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephen

    Hey, very nice poem I like your writings, maybe if you get the time you can check out some of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really liked the peom. Good job since it only took 15 minutes. I could tell it was from deep within your heart. Keep up the good work ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I really liked it, good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Confused Queen

    GREAT JOB I ENJOYED IT 5/5