This is an excellent poem!! i loved it!! i'm sorry that you had your heart broken though

Thats so sad i am sry........hope things work out. i will be prayign for you bro. good luck.

LISSA

Aww hun I really hope this isn't true!!! Great write and it's full of emotion.. Keep your head up.. But it better not be true!!!! Talk to you later... Lots of Love

!^I Love Being In Love^!

Im sorry you just lost your girl. hold your head up high... it'll get better soon. great drop. propz. 5/5

I loved it! And thanx for all of your comments on my poems, and i am not just rturning the favor, i am going to tell you how to get published! Okay, go to childrens publishers, and send them your work! My dad said it was that simple! Tell me how it works out! 5/5 excellent!

Vrry strong poem.....

The emotion your poetry contains is breathtaking!