Another brilliant master piece! Flawless flow and mesmerizing imagery. I'm loving the last stanza, truly remarkable. Take care and please post more soon~Holly

0mg 0mg heather!!! ur back! 0mg h0w u been!!!? such a t0uching p0em. u havent l0st ur t0uch at all. beautifully w0rded. heartfelt just amazing. great use 0f w0rds keep up the amazing w0rk!!! =)

l0ve always d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

A beautiful and romantic write... this was beautiful.

love ya, Ann

Its a bit forced in its sense of overpowerment but other wise great. Fantastic language, structure, and vocab use. Welldone.

This poem didn't realy capture my attention too well, and I don't see how it is about love.