Comments : Beautiful sunsets

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    It is a good poem
    i usually dont go
    for love poems myself but
    this one is good
    its also not really long but
    it is awesome so
    that is wonderful
    great poem great job
    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This si a good peice. i very rarly read love poems but i like this one.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Thats was very good very sweet poem your very talented 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Lovely Poem I cant give anything less than a 5!!!! Keep writing!

    Ali

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was beautiful. Keep up the good work. You are really talented. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nicely done. I really loved your poem... It is absoultly flawless and just simply beautiful... It flowed nice and the grammer is the best I've seen in a long time! This poem definelty deserves a five.. Keep it up

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by pebbles

    So gud. ill give it a 5. its really reminds me of there really mean it. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Awesome poem !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Oh I really like this. It has such emotion. You have a great way with words.. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is amazingly beautiful. I love it, the rhyming is great. And I love the message, it's so sincere.

    Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Beautifully Written I must say...I love the flow of it...It was amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by *Chels & Britt*

    Praying for loves angels to lend us a hand.
    ^^ that line gave me goosebumps I love it!!

    I really liked your ending most...great closure to this poem it gave hope to those who have a love like this and probably reminded yourself that theres hope! Beautifully written poem! I loved the title!! Very eye catchy!
    -Chels

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    It was good, i really liked it!! Soo sweet..i have had that feeling before, so i know what you mean!! Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    @...wow...the rhythm was amazing, the flow was perfect and it was beautiful overall....i honestly loved it:):) 5/5...@

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Feels as though its missing something, lacks depth...I think love poems should be deeply well thought out expressions but again this seems typical of the aabb rhyming schemes you see so frequently on here...you shold have stretched the emphasis on the sunset a lil more...used better imagery...still nice poem all the same.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Really really beautiful. i loved it start to finish. well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Loulou

    This is sweet. I like this poem and how it looks different in the stanzas then your other ones i have read so far.