I loved it. i was diffrent. nice flow. i really enjoyed reading this.
Emma 5/5

Wow.. this is amazing.. i loved every single word.. beautiful piece.. its so deep and profound.. keep it up
take care
NannO

Perhaps some day I will
Pour your broken contents
Onto my pillow -

So all your pain will
Rest with me while I dream.

That was the best line I've ever heard in a poem! I wish I had your writing talent to collect such a deep feeling in such a small amount of words. Excellent Job, 5/5!!

Wow that was a nice poem!....5/5! and keep-up-the-good-work!

Very thought provoking - i sense a theme of butterflies in your poems...!

5/5 Excellent poem it was absolutely amazing your an amazing writter..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This was so beautiful, you have unique imagery, this oozes emotion and there is a certain confidence radiating from this. I loved it!!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Absolutely beautiful.. i loved it.. lots of imagery that filled my senses.. it was so full of emotion and.. and.. i cant explain it.. for me, it was reli overwhelming.. lol, if its not meant to bring about that effect, then i must be prone to being overwhelmed.. lol.. but it was reli breath-taking.. moving words
keep it up.. 5/5
take care
NannO

I love this. flowed nicely as all yr poems do. so much passion.

I like the different setup you used. It was VERY different but it was also VERY good. :) 5/5

Wow, that was pretty dang good, I loved the imagery in this one.

5.5