I loved it, it was kinda sad, but it was so good and the confodence within the poem was so deep, i felt it was from your heart and it was brilliant
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Wow that was really raw. I loved the sense of emptiness and desolation in this and the last line was really powerful.
5/5

Honest write but the flow shifts instead of saying the same. Just tighten some lines and it'll be fine.

Wow, that was a pretty good poem. Seems like something out of a TV show, or a movie or something. The way people just casually have sex and leave. Interesting piece.

AnnMarie --
You did a pretty good job on this! The only reason that I gave it a 4/5 was because of the flow. It was really unsteady, which kind of pulled the readers attention away from the actual writing. If this is fictional, which I hope it is, you sure did make it sound convincing. If its non-fiction, I`m sorry you had to go through that. Guys can be such idiots. 4/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

God damn.. This is a strong poem and I have no idea why... Wow.. Just wow..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very interesting

"I'll buy myself some coffee maybe some new shoes
all the while, making a new me and finding a new you."

^ I love the ending it is so powerful and really sums up the whole poem. I think you could improve it by taking away and adding a few syllables here and there, making the flow better. Other than that I like it, it tells a sad story... 5/5
- Polly

Not sure if I have left a comment on this poem yet. But if so sorry, and if not. I love it, I knew what you where talking about and it was so well written. Great Job.

I thought it was a good poem again, it is kind of realistic which is unfortunatily true.
great job again

Horny but true poem lol