This poem is wonderfull great job
5/5
love always tabby

Mattt my love haha, wooh, i'm so glad you've submitted another piece of art onto this website, I do not think this website can hold such talent though, you are an aamazing writer as i've said a billion times before hehe, you make me smile hun, dont ever change,xxoo

Yay! your back! n yes, it was another stunning piece, as always i was left in awe! i cant get over how amazingly talented u are! dont ever stop writing :) xxxxxx

Hey Matty!

Long time no see man! lol well this poem was long...and it rhymed.. Those are my only complaints lol

The imagery is ace, I love it… I would marry it lol, diction is at a very high level for someone of your age, Your a smart guy =) I hope to hear more from you soon!
I really loved this stanza:

Add in flecks of gold and black,
All but pupils, which I lack,
Blues and greens and whites and reds,
Bring in life into the dead.

Cause I feel that way sometimes too! Its like a prefect description of emptyness right? Well that what I got out of it so… the readers always right =D

Love Jenn
Ps:Your quote... its not even funny how much I can relate to it. Except its our lady peace not Kelly Clarkson =)

Another break up.

I guess its back to bed, books, and Kelly Clarkson songs.

Awww yay Im so happy you back together-smiles-

Wow, that's stunning. So average for you I guess =). Keep writing!

Wow..havent heard from u in so long and i wish tht i knew wat was going on..if u have email..please write to me?
i miss u heaps matt!!
hope you're ok
*hugs*
xoxoxoxoxoxox
Love, the 2nd best:P
thats a bit rich but hey...:P
xoxoxo

What ever happened to you, Matters?

Aww im back to this site and im glad, i missed all of of your guys work, especially yours, aww you are one of my favorite poets ever ah, i missed your work lol, i loved this one btw its amazing woow, take care hun,xxoo

I c a shakespeare reborn...right in front of my eyes...on the screen of the computer...where I c a poem by u...hehe...nice nice...u r definitely wot the poetry world needs...dun ever stop writing...n maybe one day...I'll like 2 c a book from u...good one Matt...

WOW!!! Words simply cannot describe this poem!! Honestly, it is so awesome. I've never read anything like this. I mean...so incredible! To be so young, your poetry is so completely, indescribably amazing. Don't ever quit writing.

all the best wishes,
Mary

Oh, M-a-a-aaaatt.............

Good work i like it

I love it and mainly the last part of it.

COol

It' good, the site needs more like you

Man, ur still as good as the last time I'm here, I'm really jealous u noe...haha, oh well, ur vocabs is still very powerful, juz luv the words, n young man, if u stl remember wot i said before...publish a book! Haha...tc young man...adios...

I love ur poems
i have read some of them
more than once
but each time i read them '
i feel like im reading them
for the first time
keep writing you're doing great!

I love ur poems
i have read some of them
more than once
but each time i read them '
i feel like im reading them
for the first time
keep writing you're doing great!

Wow!!!! that was very well written. i give it a 5/5.