Omg that is absolutly beautiful...i couldnt stop reading i wanna hear more! i miss our conversations in the chatroom....i got kicked out for....some reason...but....anyways so u wanna be a pro volleyball player?? same! ive been playing since i was about 10. ive got a huge tournoment tommorow actually...i have to wake up at like 5 in morning and travel up to LA....but anyways i hope your dream comes true! im sure your a wonderful vb player. i wish i could play you! that would b fun...yah im bored...
ttyl!!
~cherry

The beginning was great i don't know where the end comes from but it's great

Eloquent and powerful. Nice use of imagery...keep writing...you have talent. I took a 22 year break from writing and wish I never had. You will go far.

Very well done, i felt like i was in your poem for a moment there lol. Good job!

Some beautiful imagery in this that made it a refreshing read. In places the punctuation needs a little attention, but other than that, good job.

Thanks for the comment on my poem "orange peel" your interpretation is hilarious; it shows what's on your mind lol.

Take care,
Silver.

The last stanza was awesome, really put a shock through me. I LOVED this soo much. You're a truly gifted poet!

Your Friend,
Empty Space...(Harald)

Very beautiful, really made me smile

You, have an awesome talent. Great words for choice in this one. 5/5

nick

I love your poems. They flow so easily, and your choice of words couldnt be better. They seem so perfect as if the words just came out of your mouth and onto the page without hesitation. I admire your work. I could sit down and read your poems for hours.

I love your poems. They flow so easily, and your choice of words couldnt be better. They seem so perfect as if the words just came out of your mouth and onto the page without hesitation. I admire your work. I could sit down and read your poems for hours.