He is actually me

by The Poetic Child   Jan 28, 2006


A kid walks down the street
Broken and torn apart
His Sadness drops to his feet
He has a Broken heart

He walks down all alone
as a tear drops from his face down
The weeping and terror in his tone
but no one hears his sound

His tear is drops to the floor
and no one there on his side
To him, his pain people ignore
and he's wrapped tighter in the bide

He just sits down on his bed
lays there in such silence
Crazy things run in his head
but never such violence

His heart is broken and crushed
from this ones he thought cared
his feelings were took-en and flushed,
though he took his heart and shared

The hurting pain feels so bad
But no one can even see,
True Love is something he never had,
He is actually.....Me

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  • 11 years ago

    by Peyton

    Wow i've read all ur poems and they r FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can u plz comment on mine and tell me how i could improve? emeil me.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ian brennan

    Awesome job man its really sad but it really expresses itself so good job

  • 11 years ago

    by Always4You

    That was great! You are an excellent poet...Keep it up..Your work is amazing!!
    ~Always4You~

  • 11 years ago

    by Tasha

    Thanks a bunch for commenting on my poem. And I do really like this poem, your other ones were good too, but this one is my favorite. I love how it is a story kind of.

  • 11 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    There was some bumps for flow but overall excellently done. That is a great poem.
    ~Unforgiven