I wrote this in China, not knowing enough of the language to communicate with any real skill...i was left to people watch and wonder what was going on inside people..under their skins...so to speak.

Outstanding! I like the complexity of this, it's absolutely brilliant.
I'm also loving the way this says so much in so few lines, quite remarkable.
Welcome to the club! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Lovely piece. I've checked out some others too and enjoyed ... awaiting more.

Not only in China, do we guess what inhabits one's soul :D, so this is a poem we can hold in relation. beautifully done, kevin.

love,
Heather.