I like the way you have described walls.

Oh my God, this was amazing! I can completely relate, unfortunately!

Wonderful, superb write Gary, superlative!!!

Great descriptions, and overall a very welll written peice.

I really wish to get time 4 reading all of your poems, BTW thanks for your nice notes on mine, I appreciated your kind lines cya

A feeling of enclosure can also become closure ... it's there to find, just push the walls back!

I love what I feel when I read your poems, they do make me think.

Alone in the silence and the gloom as I wait
for you to return and once more
light my dark world,
illuminate my desolate life,
to set my soul on fire,

These lines spoke right to me. Another excellent and heartwrenching piece.

Gary I love to read your writing. I loved this poem. You can really feel the lonliness in this one. Great writing! Cindy