another fantastic poem. guys and everyone else should cry, its healthy. Guys think its a weeak sign to cry... but it shows strength in my opinion. When a man cries it shows hes not afraid to show ppl how he truly feels, and its not good to keep things buried inside.. well great job. 5/5
Hey this is really good but just becuz a boy is a boy they have a right to cry although it may be a bit feminine lol :D but any ways thanks for the comment and maybe i will but hes been treating me better lately lol thanks -Amirah
I miss ur poems and u nitin! so sorry i havent been around.
This had tears in my eyes, and i hope you know that it is ok for boys to cry, yet i do see the strength in this masterpeice of writing.
Ohhh so sad =( The worst part is, there really are people out here who have gone through such pain... my heart goes out to them... and I hope that you are not one of them. Fantastic writing, keep up the great work. xoxo
Oh my gosh. i am actually breathless. thats amazing, im definetaly gonna check out more of your work. its an amazing story and it saddens me to think that people actually do go through that and its amazing how they can stay so strong. amazing