Wow, this was incredible and the flow was perfect! Excellent write, I love it!

Absolutely astounding! i loved it, from beginning to end!
there's nothing crtitical to say except maybe instead of saying "cloaking" in the first line, i would have said cloaked. only because you go from present participle tense to past. i just think it would make more sense.
other than that, it was an absolutely wonderful poem!
keep writing and staysafe, strong, and healthy!
*AntiSocial16*