Wow this was really really good....makes me think about all the childhood friends i have lost b/cuz i had to move to another state *tear*
great poem
very well written...
i love it.... 5/5

much love
(dino)

Beautiful

If i had to guess who this was about..i would say either, Jessica Or Michelle..Not sure which one..But Nice Poem.Your getting there..only 7 more to go...
I had to comment at least one of your poems now..lol
ttyl
Love ya babe
bye....
XXXXXX

Wonderful poem, I really really loved it. Great Job! Reminds me of a friendship i had when i was a child up until about 2 years ago.

Wow this is a great poem. I have one similar to this on. Its called "Friends forever". Anyways, this is a great poem, 5/5

Wow you're pretty good at this poetry thing.

Hey..I love it, very sweet. I like the ending, their footprints will always be in the sand, nice piece.

That was a cute poem, very well written. I loved the way it was all tied together. Not any mistakes that i could see.

Grand job, 5/5

I LOVED this poem. You really have talent. Keep up the awesome work!!!!

I liked this a lot. It is very touching cause all of us have lost friendships along the way. Good job

I liked this a lot. It is very touching cause all of us have lost friendships along the way. Good job

Hey that was beautiful! really powerful! my best friend died when i was 7 and reading that made me remember her. keep up the ab fab work!

That's so cute! I'm sorry you've lost such a good friend!

Very excellent. i loved it. 5/5

Its good

You are such a good writter. Flow, rhythem, thought, emotoin, and I know you didn't write this so it could be read by countless people you don't know, but it will relate to a lot of people. Makes me think of my lost friend... I hope the scenes you used aren't just figurative, I hope you actually expiranced this, memmories are great things to hold on to, and I wish I had more with my lost friend.

Your IMing buddy Sadly_content aka Purple

Aww I love it! it's sooo cute! My bff moved away and I haven't seen her in a while but we try to talk on the phones, but we're always soo busy...I love your work!
*Mandie*

Aww such a cuteee poem~ loved it ~britt

Omgosh...that was so cute...i think i cried a little...lol...great poem hun.

This is such a sweet friendship poem - i can totally agree how, even when friendship is gone/over, its still left its mark. beautiful writing!