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by Momentary Relapse Jan 30, 2006
Dark, fantasy /
Wraith with deceiving prowess
Shards of anger embedded within
Obscured immortality fading
Cleanse the soul from this sin
Unholy demon of eternal flame
Delve deep to find nothing inside
Forsworn enemy of imperfections
Infecting the mind to flee and hide
Cryptic warnings difficult to preceive
Doubt a bitter remedy of desire
False circumstances full of malice
The flames of eternity no longer inspire
Consequence of immortal passion
Bloodlust of sadistic pleasure
Pallor of death another masquerade
A lost soul for eternal treasure
Honesty fades as it is broken
Subconscious plight amends due
Full of malice and full of scorn
Paranoia a destructive way to subdue
Lacerate flesh with fatal kisses
Almandite eyes incipient wraith
Blood from the immortal womb
Disputed changes of forgotten faith
Clandestine immolations of life
The lament of an unaffectionate death
Weeping once with almandite tears
Everlasting stillness of immortal breath
This piece is unique and superbly written. It's very descriptive.
Really good poem, it deserves 5/5.
Very dark, tells a great story, amazing read, great write!
This poem has to be one of my favorites. It's dark and tells a huge story behind it. Every line to me was captivating. I give this a 5/5. Good choice of words...
by Independence Forever
Very dark and crawling. a good read
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