I really like this poem , especially like the way its set up like short lines. It seems to add so much more meaning to it like I dunno how to explain it lol. great job 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

That was a really good poem! ur a very good writer! Keep up the good work! lol!

Hey joey. i like that poem. you are a good writer. keep it up!
bye-bye
-Annie