He is actually me...Part II

by The Poetic Child   Jan 31, 2006


The kid justs sits by himself
no one to turn to
uncaring on his Health
never knowing what to do

He's hurt so bad
he cant even fake it
He just wants to be glad
The pain he cant take it

His pain leaves a scar
right in the middle of his heart
never going far,
cause his soul is torn apart

sometimes he sits and cry
his heart so Sore
he has to tell a lie
which closes another door

Tears racing down his cheek
Feelings alone and hurt
He feels so useless and weak
low down to the dirt

he looks at the ground
his head down and See's what came,
look what he has found
a whole bucket full of shame

he feels as if hes unwanted
like there no use
he sits there and gets taunted
it feels like abuse

He justs there alone
Lonely as can be
you can hear the saddening tone
He is actually.....Me.

Vote and comment..i would definitely appreciate and i would do it return....

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  • 17 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Very good! tha tis one of my favorites. alot of guys don't go as deep into their porms as you. they just right about how they tried to do it with someone, but it didn't happen. i hate that! n-e-wayz. 5/5 keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    EXCELLENT!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    You should check out my latestpoem "No more abuse" My guy friend kicked me to the curb, so i decided to kick him to the curb in poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow that is such an intense poem..sry if this is real. keep writing though, and godo jobb wit letting your true colors show.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    I loved it! I know that i say that after i read one of your poems, but that is because it is true! oh, and it's okay that you forgot to vote and comment on my poem, like you said we are all human! i iked this poem alot! keep it going!