Very good, i love the hindsight idea

Wow... amazing!!! glad you're posting again. take care,
-xXx-

I love both the hindsight idea and the poem. I have to wonder how you came up with it. It's pretty cool.

.. its just a thought i was thinking about... when i die.. i will still see her in heaven.. and she will know. know that it was supposed to be us all along.
hence-hindsight

~David

Good poem man, I really don't know what to do anymore. My whole situation was a little different but it ended the same. But there still could be hope to find a way to rebuild everything. I don't know what to do until then.. But good stuff

This is very good peice, really like the concept of it

5/5

Hullo again fellow writer. I know you don't know this, but when I lack in inspiration, you and illuminati are usually the ones I run to. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't, but this time it definately did. I loved that poem. It wasn't very long, but I know the feeling and the thought. It really hurts that it takes so long for the person you love to see that it was meant to be. (No rhyme intended) It was a really sad poem, and I could relate to it, perhaps not fully because I haven't lost him, but in my own situation he does pull away from me alot... Anyway though, not to get too far into that, I just wanted to say thankyou for the inspiration, I am now once again, off to write - hopefully an improved type of poem to those of the others I have written recently. I don't know if it's because I'm sleepy or what, but I had to read it twice to get the feel of the rhythm - and even then it still deserves a 5/5. Beautiful write my friend.

This is awesome. i had to read it a couple of time to truely analyse it and understand it properly. a beautiful piece with such a strong meaning. xXx