Comments : One Wish

  • 11 years ago

    by Tasha

    Nice poem and thanks for commenting on mine. It was really nice. And dont quit you are good. And I am glad that it made you think, so now you know how I feel when I read yours.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nymphetamine

    Beautiful poem. So simple and yet so sweet at the same time. Good use of rhyming, it flowed well.
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by catherine

    You made me cry. That is pure beauty and really hits to home. You are a wonderful poet.

  • 10 years ago

    by chelsa

    This is so wonderful,s uch talent. If you did not show this to her, you most definitely should. There are some other ones youwrote about a girl too? Wow, if someone wrtoe me something like this, I'd be blown away. I'm sure she'll love // she loved it. I did ! and I think everyone else did as well. nice work, keep writing! :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Anthony smith

    I love this poem. I feel the same way about this girl that I like. i feel where you're coming from. I hope you can relate to my poem " Ms. Nelson Has No Idea". please leave a comment.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ivy Stockill

    Wow, beautiful. I loved it.

    XXIVYXX

  • 8 years ago

    by SgrQn

    I think those words were really honest. they flowed and showed real emotion. keep it up! loved it

  • 7 years ago

    by BraidhairCutie

    LOVED IT!...VERY BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET!..

  • 7 years ago

    by sade

    This is too cute.
    I love it

  • 6 years ago

    by misa

    Absolutely beautiful =) I smiled with every line and great ending, so blissful. Keep up the amazing work, I admire it.

  • 6 years ago

    by misa

    Absolutely beautiful =) I smiled with every line and great ending, so blissful. Keep up the amazing work, I admire it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Michelle Stapp

    This poem is so sweet it touches my heart =) Please keep on writing, I would absolutely love to hear more =)