This is really good.
The rhymes wernt forced they were just right
i like the forn of the poem
i loved everything!
Love Always
-NErdyPants

Very good peice, only thing is the line "you to be gone" it doesnt actually have a couplet..... the rest of the poem flows and rhymes well though.

This poem was awsome. I really liked it. *5/5*

Wow, i loved it. great job. thanks for the comment on my poem.

I liked the message behind the words and everything but......it was really choppy. the rhythm was off in every line. i liked the feeling though so good job.

Wow , u got style in writing ... thats really somethin , Keep it up !!