Comments : Material World

  • 12 years ago

    by Sondos

    A fantastic poem. You portray what I always try to get across to people but rarely succeed. Great Work Definite 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Chris Harding

    By stupidity from all sides

    - I really hate that spell checker... it murders my work every time! lol

    Thanks anyway, muchos appreciated! This is one of my favourite poems, I just wish I could be this inspired again... :/

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey thsi was really an inspiring poem, i really liked the message. greta work dear

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Chris,

    I also hate the spell checker too sometimes. This was very deeply rooted and extremely powerful, a poignant choice of words. Well done!

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beauitfully penned, Chris.

    "A fragmented unity
    Society divided
    The passionate teenager
    Its tragic victim"

    these lines are so true of the so called modern world that we are all invariably victims of.

    great work; enjoyed reading this. Thank you very much for your comments on my work!

    good lucka and keep writing

    shobhana

  • 12 years ago

    by Sondos

    This poem is pretty amazing

    Brilliant Job here
    I'm from almost near Derby!

    All the Best
    Sondos

  • 12 years ago

    by ...

    Hey thank you so much for commenting on my poem :) lol not many ppl comment so its always so nice to hav some1 say something really good about something im proud of. I really like your poem, its so true, unfortunately..
    anyway, hav a great day keep up the great writing :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha Compton

    Fabulous and inspiring. haha, yeah, the spell check didn't exactly catch everything. But I totally got the point of your poem, and I liked it alot. hopefully this spark of devine creativity will revisit you someday.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chris Harding

    Cheers thanks alot for the comments - another correction error I just noticed! Lol:

    It's tragic victim
    And it's frontline soldier

    ... Jeez... I really am getting sick of this thing butchering stuff, I'm gunna complain! :P

    peace x

  • 12 years ago

    by Si Chotic

    Another poem that i loved!

  • 11 years ago

    by Si Chotic

    I REALLY LIKED IT!

  • 8 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Fantastic write 10/5