My soul is just hurt

by The Poetic Child   Feb 4, 2006


I gave her what she wanted
But shes still going away
her love she just taunted
Cause she never felt that way

Deep down his heart is aching
But all you see is a frown
My heart is now breaking,
as I go down

I lay on the ground
thinking about the girl
in my mind she was found
the girl of my world

Her smile so gentle and sweet
But it makes me cry
As I Glance from head to feet
cause I have to wave goodbye

I don't want to say goodbye
I want to be with her forever
but her love was just a lie
So now its For Never

I Thought she was the one
But the truth is she's not
Her Face shinned like the sun
and also made it hot

When she was around
Chills when down my spine
But the truth was found
That she was never Mine

I Want to run out my door
I want to run away
But I'm just laying on this floor
Never Going to be OK

I justs glare at this picture
Love was my fact
and i always will love her
but hers was an act

Tears creeping out
there's tears on my shirt
I'm just falling all out
My soul is just hurt..

Dedication- I dedicate this poem to all those men/woman who have been hurt and torn apart so easily...To those who gave there heart out...But never got a heart in return.....

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  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow, this poem is amazing. Its has so much emotion put into it, with such depth and meaning. So sad though, i'm sorry that that happened to you...

    Your flow and rhythm was wonderful! Every line flowed so well, and nothing seemed forced. This is a great write! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*~*Jenna Leigh*~*~

    WOW your a very good poet!!! i loved the whole thing!!! keep it up! 5/5

    ttyl
    kiss,kiss,
    *~*~*~Jenna Leigh~*~*~*~*

  • 11 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    Wow another beautiful poem written by you
    keep up the great work

  • 11 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Wow!.... thats all i can say lol

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    You missed soem poems you... Hold On, Sometimes and etc please read them sry its importatn keep writn lvoe this one